Thursday, May 21, 2009

the day dream

sometimes it a scene
or it's just a single tone or melody
that gives you a chill to the bone

not an unpleasant feel. but more like a frequency synchronization
your body tells you it heard that before.
it felt that before, maybe just your conscious mind depressed it.

The melody, struck in your mind, struck hard.
it's emotional, but no tears.
just you sitting there, your feelings pulled out from the reality
trying to recognize the time and space in a different dimension
like when you're lying there with the one you love in sleep, it quite, it's peaceful.


just when the reality hits, you're on the street by yourself, lonely.
but the feeling still lingers in your mind. Like an echo.
and you walk forwards.

4 comments:

little miss erika said...

ting. you're such a good writer.

love it.

love this.

i know what you mean
(i think. i know what i think you mean.)

Tingler said...

I know what you mean, erika, I know. ha

collette charles said...

ting this is really really good. like you should submit this somewhere. please.

Tingler said...

ha. thank you collette. but I think it's going to suck. it needs a lot of refinements before even going public(isn't it already public now?)